snail revisited

Grifmo. Move a little faster. CC BY-NC-ND 2.0

Coiled tight around her beating heart
she ventures forward.

With the weight of all heavy on her back
she scribes the world in silver.

I have revisited this poem I am getting more minimalist. Nothing kills a poem quicker than weighing it down with too many words.

I am very thankful to the photographer. To me, this photo embodies the courage, beauty and artistry of the snail.



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